the whole animal thing was cool.. not really the ultimate angst poem, but still good

Lovely! I love the switch from first person, to narritive!From the persona, to the eagle, and the eagle and bird metaphor all together! (crows) soaring! perfect perfect perfect! GENIOUS! The mate just wants a **, a fun ride, but the persona wants more. This poem "killed me" into profound thought for eternity, I LOVE IT!

It's interesting. Not sure if I'd go for ultimate angst...just kidding. Great job

I am not going to say it wasnt angsty coz it was nicely written...it reminded me of my own poem called "Ignored" You should read it...really nice

Skullz

Hmm...this is actually pretty good. It sums up what angst is.

Not sure if I'd call this the "ultimate", but I'd say that this was very nicely written. I liked the imagery. Thnx for sharing.

Not sure the title fits...but ok poem anyway.