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| Skitters 2005-10-23 ch 1,   | I love it its so beautiful |
| simpleplan13 2005-09-30 ch 1, | beautiful metaphor |
| The tribes tale 2005-09-27 ch 1, | um call me perverse but i am starting to notice a "pun" in the word come. And this "pun" would truely show that in a quiet night, one could pop "an honest hint of glee" The fun with poetry and all im finding (espcially poems such wellcrafted as the ones you pen) is that everything ahs double meanings, or at least i think so. Hope my grotesque ideas gave you a jaded view of this review, i really cherish your poem. |
| A Face Worth Remembering 2005-09-25 ch 1, | Nice. I liked the rhyming |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-24 ch 1, | Simple but gives off a witty feel. |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-09-24 ch 1, | interesting. i like it tho |