interesting.. no idea what its about, but interesting

beauty truely is decieveing, isnt it? We all love beautiful things, envy them, dispise them, idolize them. Beauty is just what were told, something ugly can be easly beautiful right? I wonder if one had a choice to choose what is truely beautiful(if you could classify anything as such) how diffrent we would be, as a society as a whole. Ive always found the word beauty condescending, for if somethings beautiful it must have the contrast of something ugly. (lol the taoist in me speaks, yin-yang) Keep your head up and we'll advoid those traps together, your already a freeded mind, you can never get snared in a wile.

Nice twist. Short, but it works. Bravo.

awesomeness. sometimes short poetry just ends up failing to become anything artistic or beautiful or with a point at all. but yours does. because. you. ROCK.

nicely done. i applaud you.

Hmm...I don't know how to describe this. At least it's good that you realise that it's a trap, most of the others would fall for it because of it's beauty. Anyways, good job.

~~Trinity

Hey...this was great!^_^ I liked the ending as usual. It ends good. I've been in that situation before.

Short but (bitter)sweet.

Depends...what place? lol jk