the ending was unexpected... I love the beginning because i can totally relate

I love the last two lines, at first its all about the narrator of the poem, then it mentions "you" "watch the world go" You yearn to live, when the rest dread to take a risk. You said in a review im your hero, im no hero, im just another meager man, no more special than anything, your my hero. But don't forget it is impossible to scrape the cealing, on account the wild soul sees no limit to ones imagination.:)(though my seeing this, you already figured that out:))

Again, very nice twist.

It's a very cute little poem (that's probably not the correct term, but I'm a little out of it :P)

Don't we all feel like that sometimes? Leave those that don't dare to take a risk behind!

Keep writing! ^-^

I can relate...this is what dreams and ambition would be if they were put together in a poem. The flow is also good. Sweet piece.

'I want to know all the secrets/But still love the mysetries'I liked this, it has an atmosphere to it that I can't quite describe

i like the tree tops thing...very original! good job