I know how taht feels.. I could help you eliminate the double spacing if you want

Great poem. You're right, there are things worse then just being alone. oh, 'For to feel lonely does no mean' does not? great job. -Elli

Very good descritions, the whole feel of it was great. loved it.

very well done, very true and very good imagery to support the message. this poem was incrediably written. you have a remarkable talent for making words fit into the shapes you want them too so that others can see them aa well. thank you for sharing this with us. it's a poem one can learn from.