Reviews for My Angel in Disguise

sunday night sky 2005-09-28 ch 1,	abusei love this poem, it is so beautiful and so realistic... the words are perfect and there are some really lovely lines 'The folded memories you wrote with a faulty black pen' and 'These lyrics wrap around my heart'i can completely relate to it... keep writing x
Nightwitch87 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abuseWow, I absolutely love this poem! It conveys so much emotion, so much sadness. I think it should be in the category "love", though. The whole poem is really well-written, and the ending is beautiful! You have a great way of using images to underline feelings. The structure seemed a bit off around the middle, but besides that, everything about "My Angel in Disguise" was wonderful!
backseats on thursdays 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abusewow, breathtaking work. Truly amazing!
Winter Reflections 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abusewow this is GREAT! hehe! keep writing! i love it!! Claire
Ian Shweltser 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abuseGreat job. I think you used exactly the right metaphors and weave a picture with your words.Just make sure you don't have to many syllables in your lines. Great job! ~Ian- please review some of my work