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| JC-Saved-Me 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseNicelt written. I like the little enlightenment/revelation bit towards the end "Forgive me Lord, for I finally see!". Sometimes we just need the wool taken from our eyes by Jesus to truly see what's going on. Much in Him, xRachx |
| Nightwitch87 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseVery deep and spiritual! This poem perfectly captures a moment of realization, and it's very well-written. I like the trail of thought it conveys, while seeming "symmetrical" at the same time. Great job! |