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Reviews For: Surface Smiles, Deeper Wounds

JC-Saved-Me
2006-10-22
ch 1,
abuseNicelt written. I like the little enlightenment/revelation bit towards the end "Forgive me Lord, for I finally see!". Sometimes we just need the wool taken from our eyes by Jesus to truly see what's going on.
Much in Him,
xRachx
Nightwitch87
2005-09-25
ch 1,
abuseVery deep and spiritual! This poem perfectly captures a moment of realization, and it's very well-written. I like the trail of thought it conveys, while seeming "symmetrical" at the same time. Great job!
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