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Reviews For: Good Girl
Arichos 2005-09-27 . chapter 1
Cool. Sort of puts you inside the mind a little. Maybe a little improvement on your word structure, but other then that, pretty good.
Pushkin'sMuse 2005-09-26 . chapter 1
sry, don't really like your style.
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