Wow. I loved this poem! You have a way with words. There is so much hope seeping into the lines. I loved the fourth line "It means for a time we're apart." So good. Keep up the good work!

this is so delicate and lovely. Gentle and well-paced its simplicity adds to the overall effect. Lovely work.

Pretty well done as always... *faint chuckle* although... to the mayority of ppl a 'good bye' has a sence of finality (even to me) your point of view in this poem is very hopeful... and at the same time quite true... I see a lot of reviewers love the last two lines... but for me the first two are the ones that got the entire feeling of the piece... like talking straight from the heart... I'm certainly pleased with this poetry...

Aw! That's so sweet. It sounds like a song in like a movie when two people are parting. You can see them hugging but they aren't talking and the only thing you can hear is this poem. Bravo. Beautiful.

Such a sweet poem, Beuatiful work, and the repitition of the last line works well. Keep writing. all my love, shadowed mind

I like the sentiments behind your poem. I like how it can relate to someone who has never been inlove. It's none bias your poem, alot of people will appreciate that.

Wow...The ending sums this piece up beautifully. Excellent write! Keep'em coming!

Needa S.

Achingly Beautiful.

aw...=( *adds to favorites* wicked awesome poem right here...reminds me of someone...*cries*

~*Toni*~

sad, hopeful, meloncholic. a poem that leaves one both full and empty at once. gorgeous poem.

~* noelle

Sad, but hopeful. It seems, at least to me, by you repeating the last two lines, "But our love remains strong,Our love remains strong." You're trying to reasure yourself. Make it all seem real. It brings the hopefulness out and the possiblity that it may not work out.

Sweet poem, it's always painful to say goodbye. You conveyed this difficult time really well, very enjoyable read!

I found this quite uncertain, the repetition in the last lines suggests a need for reassurance. But maybe I'm just too bitter to see the happiness :)

Beautiful.

very lovely, i liked it!! good job!!