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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-21 ch 1,  | abuseWow, one of your best. I love it. |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abusetrue |
| catseyeview 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abusewonderful as usual |
| lifescrewsusall 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abusevery wise. i guess i just like the viewpoint of it all. the profound judgment was a little unclear to me because it made me think it was satirical maybe but i dunno. well at least it made me think. good work on this. |
| AllyCred 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abusei like the last line, very dark and just overall good...well done. lots of love~AC~ |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is like really fascinating; its os fascinating that the vally girl in me is coming out. Its like no matter how much happiness that you give to others, it still wont get you much in return, and no matter what you do for others, its still the things that you do for yourself that get judged by some kind of higher power. Usually the stuff that we do to make ourselves happy is a bit shaddy so of course we'll be judged poorly by them. We're all playing a game that we'll never win. Juliet. |