Wow. That was one of the best original pieces I've read. Beautiful! You know, it would make a good movie, I mean, you wrote it so believably! And you did great on the butterfly engraving, cheesy at all.

Lauren

I love the story it's really good. I think you should do a sequel just because I liked it so much. NAh, but it would be kewl for you to do tht. I read it all in one sitting b/c I'm weird.


~Nicole

Aw! i think that was a great way to end the story! i'm looking forward to what you'll write next!

Ah! Is that enough? It's the end. It's a brilliant way to end the story but its the end and I loved it so much...no lol. Sorry. I loved every bit of it. I think its one of the best I've read. Everything about it is brilliant. I just cant believe its the end! Oh well I'm sure more great stories will be coming from you in the future, keep the writing going.

Aww...I love the ending! Yes!! Sean and Loran got back together!! Yay!! Such a happy ending!! Love this story so so so much!! So sad it's finish!! *tears*

Please write more! D:
It's really good
As for slight improvement: At some parts it does become slightly redundant (Example: when the crew is introducing themselves or giving a group decision)
Other than that, its bad-ass squared =D

argh! omg gurl update!

Oh! My God! What's gonna happen?! What the heck is wrong with Pierre?! Is he freaking crazy or something!! Update soon!

AH I better be the third or more person to undate on this chapter. You can't do this. I've been waiting for this, can you atleast update the chapter for me if I'm not please! No one better be shot lol. Update soon.

Brilliant, sorry took so long to write another review. Internet at home is down and only just got back to university to continue reading. I hope Pierre goes to hell. I really do lol. And I kind of want Sean and Loran to get back together but at the same time I understand why she won't get back with him. If a guy said that to me, I definitely wouldn't! Lol

YAY UPDATE WOO! lol i have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Pierre...

*cheering* "Yay! You updated! Go you! Woohoo!!"
"That's so sad how Mercedes ex-boyfriend abused her." *tears*
*smiley* "It's so cute how Dani and Madi are so close. Even though they're made up... I'm a little jealous."
"I wish Sean and Loran would get back together, but Loran did the right thing." *frowning*
*hoping* "Can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story!"

omg! what is up with mercedes being all mean to that girl..."what the fuck are you crying for?" that was rlly mean! and is loran and sean gonna get back together?
btw...I LOVE THE END OF THIS CHAPTER! IT WAS SO CUTE!

*chanting* "Update! Update! Update!"
Hurry up and update! Can't wait any longer! Love the story so far, by the way!:)

Loved this chapter!^^Grr, Pierre is such a punk...