I really felt that this poem spoke to me directly. I know that this probably isn't the case, but especially when you said "I was the one, who stood when all others fell" I felt that it pertained to me.Your imagry is spectatular, and I love how this poem is set. Do you often feel as if you are there for others but they are not there for you? Or did this poem just pop in randomly?

I really don't know what to say about this one. You did good, but I don't like it. Meaning I don't like the theme of it because its so haunting. Keep going.

Argh! Why can't I write poetry like this? In English we're doing a poetry unit and I have to write some and...it's hard. Now I truly really understand how hard it is...^_^

((-Fangirl X-))

You stand for yourself no one stands for you you need nothing to lean on your better than that.~Panda I WILL STAND WHEN YOU FALL AS YOU SHOULD WHEN I DO!