The ending surprised me too. XD

I liked it a lot. The beginning lines were a great attention-grabber and the rhymes flowed...they didn't sound forced at all.

And to answer your question: I didn't really intend it to be a rhyming poem. It was just that bit in the beginning, and I only did that because it was meant to be a prologue of some sort. I just can't get the separate stanzas to space out.

Original. Some parts seemed a little off to me, but it was good none the less. The ending actually startled me. xD I scroll down and see 'DEAD' in large capital letters. Hrmhrm. Again, very original and good ideas.

~Oreo