makes me wonder... a lot... i use my best friend as sort of a diary... i tell her everything. EVERYTHING that im feeling, and... everything... it really makes me think and wonder... but i do love this. awesome.

keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-

THE METAPHOR! of the stomach and pills and NEEDLES! tapeworm imagery last line parentheses (imitation is and has been duly noted as best form of flattery) story words this is awesome.

I adore this. Superb descriptions. Lovely work in general.

Ooh, I love this. Very well written.