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Stalemate
The River Sings
2006-05-31 . chapter 1
"You fuel the fire of my unbridled anger,a wild horse not to be tamed."
My favorite line ^
Very awesome. your emotion and flow of the poem is very powerful!
awesome job!
Bookworm428
2005-09-26 . chapter 1
I love the format you did, and the imagery is very vivid. I can definitely picture it.
I don't really understand the 'God complex' bit, though.
"What billboard in your head says it’s okay to heal my scars by trying to strip me of my secrets?" That is my favorite sentence in the poem.
Cobster
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
Love the imagery, love the loose rhyming, love the title, and I love your pen name. Very, VERY nice job.
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