|Reviews for A Fall Day|
| Derek57 12/1/05 . chapter 1
Yay! Fall is so much better than any other time! (Actaully in Engalnd we call it Autumn, I'm not used to Fall, BUT I STILL LOVE IT!) heh, this was ya!Nyviay x
| The Lord's Disciple 11/9/05 . chapter 1
yeah, i love fall!hail
| LeoOsaka 9/30/05 . chapter 1
You like fall, I like fall! Me likes that you like fall! Me likes your poem. Me realizes that the internet has shot my grammar all to hell. Me likes the simplistic power of simple words. Go you!
| suckerplucker 9/26/05 . chapter 1
while this is a striking image, i think it still needs work. Because it's so short, your poem doesn't stand on its own as free verse. I would suggest either reforming it into a haiku, or inserting it as an image within a larger, longer free verse poem.
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n 9/25/05 . chapter 1
Hmm. Simple and effective. I like the imgaery. )
| Elizabeth Bilberry 9/25/05 . chapter 1
:smiles: you captured great beauty and elegance in just under 10 words.
| AmbroseMaximilien 9/25/05 . chapter 1
Cute and simple - I like it!
| Faithless Juliet 9/25/05 . chapter 1
I loved this; fall is my favorite season. Keep up the good work.
| Devidedistand 9/25/05 . chapter 1
I'm sorry, but I have to say this is the most bland poem... or anything for that matter... I've ever read in my life. I don't mean to be rude, but what compelled you to write something like this?
| nata 9/25/05 . chapter 1
Ooh, I like this. I love people who can master words in a way that they can create a picture in a person's mind without many words. For some reason I'm in love with that third line, 'glide towards the ground'. Is that weird? p