Reviews for An Outsider on the Inside

The River Sings 2006-05-31 ch 1,	I love the title. This poem...is gorgeous! The flow is good, the wording is exceptional, the emotions and imagery are there...awesome job!
Dia Rose 2006-02-04 ch 1,	I think it's very good, but doesn't quite flow just right. But that's just my opinion, the wording is awesome!
Blessashell 2005-10-01 ch 1,	That was gorgeous, truly. I just came from another writing circle where everything was angsty, gothic love and blood and the like, so this is extremely refreshing.
Bookworm428 2005-09-26 ch 1,	First off, I love the title. You have very awesome imagery. Little pictures pop into my head as I read each verse. I cannot say I understand all of it, though, but that's not your fault. On the whole, very, very good job.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-09-25 ch 1,	The vivid descriptions, makes me want to picture it. Interesting format, I'll admit but you make it work for me. I just love that last line. EB