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| Roth Jopalse Sammuels 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWow... very beautiful. I really wasn't expecting all this after reading your "Bad Joke" poem, which was written in a style much less interesting than this. I love the details, and I love the light mystery to it. Or perhaps I just don't get it, but it seems mysterious to me. I like the details, especially: "the moon soars past my eyes,the ocean silently cries," Beautiful. Please keep writing like this. |
| Mad-4-Manga 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abusem4m:Wow.o.oears: I think M4m is in shock.m4m: whoa. This sounds so NEAT!A bit random it seems, but it almost sounds like something we'd be studying in our English books! n.n I like it. |
| Nestalgica 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abusewow... that was weird... but nice, too :D good job ^_~ ~Max W.~ |