Wow... very beautiful.

I really wasn't expecting all this after reading your "Bad Joke" poem, which was written in a style much less interesting than this. I love the details, and I love the light mystery to it. Or perhaps I just don't get it, but it seems mysterious to me. I like the details, especially:

"the moon soars past my eyes,the ocean silently cries,"

Beautiful. Please keep writing like this.

m4m:Wow.o.oears: I think M4m is in shock.m4m: whoa. This sounds so NEAT!A bit random it seems, but it almost sounds like something we'd be studying in our English books! n.n I like it.

wow... that was weird... but nice, too :D good job ^_~

~Max W.~