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| crazypens 2006-08-05 ch 5,   | I liked what I read so far. I agree with the others, quite a few spelling errors. I kno you're probably sick of hearing that. But good plot over all! I like Ben and Marry! :) |
| jess 2006-07-21 ch 10, | okay, awesome concept, can't wait to read more, BUT (this is NOT a flame) your spelling and grammar is atrocious. it's a fantastic story but you really need to edit more carefully. update soon! |
| SapphireIris 2006-06-23 ch 10, | Ok, first off, this is a really cool story and I'd like to continue. So don't think this is a flame or anything. OK? Your spelling needs a bit of editing, i.e., spelling manor instead of manner, etc. Other than that, it's perfectly fine. I'd like to see more of Ben in the story though, he seems like a sweetie pie and he hasn't seen much action lately. OK? So... update!! -SapphireIris |
| Boogyoogy 2006-06-22 ch 10, | So... A LOT of spelling mistakes... some of them were uncomprehensve I understand a few... but you typed know instead of no you typed a lot of synonyms wrong BUT VERY GOOD STORY! I enjoy it a lot! I feel there was a huge time jump though... but it was really goosd and interesting just work on that spelling and grammer! |
| i.swear.to.drunk.im.not.god 2006-06-21 ch 9, | selphone? Lol. Don't you mean cellphone? Just wondering... You've really caught my intrest. Update soon!! |
| luckygurl12 2006-01-27 ch 8, | great as usual soz i haven't reviewed in a while StTuPUID SCHOOL |
| Taeron 2005-12-17 ch 7, | Very good story :) I like the idea that Mary's brain got "rewired" and now she has Tk and involuntary clairavoyance. The only problem with the story is quite a few spelling errors, but those can be excused in the face of a good storyline :) |
| Nyte Shade 2005-12-16 ch 7, | One word...wonderful |
| luckygurl12 2005-11-20 ch 5, | yah u updated VERY GOOD! UPDATE SOON! |
| Nyte Shade 2005-11-15 ch 5, | This is really good hopefully you kind of flashback and everything so we can get a better idea of their relationship. |
| Boogyoogy 2005-11-09 ch 5, | ug... not as good as others. I have to admit i was dissapointed reading this chapter. |
| luckygurl12 2005-10-28 ch 4, | great story so far! very dramatic though, update soon |
| Boogyoogy 2005-10-02 ch 3, | a little melo dramatic but... ok ill keep reading |
| Nyte Shade 2005-10-02 ch 3, | This was good. I like the way you brought it out. Keep writing im loiking forward to reading it |
| Devidedistand 2005-09-26 ch 2, | I love it! Stories about psychic people are the very best kind of stories. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please let me know when you post it! |