o this is getting so good! im so hooked on this nad cant wait to keep reading!

~SarahJane

omg i love this! and i bet he is in love with her and shes to blind to see it?! hehe cant wait to keep reading!

~SarahJane

oh im hooked! i cant wait to know what happens next! keep up the good work!

~SarahJane

sounds like a good read! cant wait to read on! keep up the good work!

~SarahJane

COME ON! AREN'T YOU GOING TO FINISH THE STORY?

hm, Jen seems to be catching on a bit...YOu know what? This could be one of those stories that people pretend to marry for various reasons and then actually end up wanna being married ! (which they already are, of course.)SCREW OPPEZZO! she should've been #3 on your list. going o, mygod. did you do ANY of your homework? ughk when she could see a complete paper right in front of her. Then again...she did always hate us...

THAT's SO CUTE! (the ending) But really, imagine if you saw someone doing that in the resturaunt you were eating in...i'd totally loose my appatite for that cheesiness. HOW CAN JEN BE SO STUPID? DUH, she likes Adam. GR. People can be so blind at times. HAHA. Samosas. Which Scott 'bumped' into you in PE? Cuz I can tell you I totally collided with Nicklas Kunkel and we landed on top of each other. Not the most comfortable. Had trouble breathing for a while...wind knocked out of my lungs. Well, update soon! ~CoconutKiwi. aka. someone u kno. (mwahahahaha!) *v*

Nice. Are you going to set Jen up with Dougie/Adam?

Sounds like a good story, if a little angsty. There's a little thing where you write, "So why is my life so pathetic." THere should be a question mark at the end instead of a period. I don't know if you care or not, but there it is.

A happy ending would be really nice. I like these characters a lot. They are completely great. The plotline is something that seems so overdone, but when you put it with the characters, it's really great. Dougie is the best. Keep up the good work and update soon.

guess what? i went and saw elizabethtown..n saw orlando bloom! whee! shuya is going craze 4 orlando!

*Claps* I like it *Keeps clapping* I hope that she sees that "Dougie" likes her. Especailly since this is the biggest idea I have ever seen anyone come up with. Hm, I like it, have I already mentioned that? Well I am saying it again! How you like them apples!!? heheheheheheWell, here...

UPDATE SOON!

~Nikkole~

I like Adam...I hope Adam was the one she was talking about in the prolouge...but that means that she lost him. Hmm.. Good chapter(s), though. XD. Happy writing.

~Larentia.

Aww, cute! Don't let lack of reviews beat you down, those who don't read don't know what they are missing.

And actually, this isn't cliché. Just because you can tell what the ending is going to be (but you could put a HUGE twist in there, too!) doesn't mean everyone has had this idea. Thanks for sharing this!

I really love this story. Your chacters are ao fun. Update soon.