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Good job. I have always loved your imagery, I tell you again, it's amazing. I love the rhymes in there, they really add to this poem's rhythm/ THis is beautiful, and I really like it. I'm going to add this to my favorites list.

My Favorite Lines: Instant happiness; just add water

Tired of the chaotic dream

I am forced to weave

Thank you for your review of Twelfth Bell, though I should warn You: IT HAS NO PLOT. Its basically random moments in a person's life that I am using for inspiration. THough I'm glad you like it.-Arrow's Flight-

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