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Syren of the Sky
2005-10-01
ch 1,
pain hurts-so much. at times, words don't seem like enough. but trust them-they're there. it's the poet that lives in your heart and your mind that will give you the reason to keep writing-the words to keep living. don't ever give up on yourself. you were given the gift of words, and it's such a beautiful gift to own... we poets, we feel everything more deeply. we see beauty where others so only a stranger walking down the street, a flower barely bloomed, a heart not yet broken. there are words to describe this every scene... you know what they are.

write them.
Arichos
2005-09-27
ch 1,
That...was... COOL! Don't know what it means, but its really good. Me really likey.
HiddenFlame42
2005-09-26
ch 1,
Very nice! Fave lines:

"These words will end at never"

"static of the soul; a writer's bane"

Great work!! :)
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