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| Loveless To Self 2006-03-03 ch 6,  | abuseDorian was so good, I would really like to see it transformed into a story...Oh well, "Dare To Dream." |
| The Girl in the Cafe 2006-01-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseBeautiful and disturbing... in fact, it reminds me forcibly of an amazing exhibit we had over the summer at the local art museum, where I work. It's called Disturbing Dolores. Coincidence...? Freaky. ~TGitC |
| likes to headbang 2006-01-06 ch 15, | abusei like how you tied everything in with cards ^^ |
| in theory 2006-01-03 ch 2, | abuseI was stunned by your language skills, so naturalistic and effortless. |
| The Lark Ascending 2006-01-01 ch 2, | abuseI feel a song coming on. . .I liked the intro though. |
| forsakensmile 2006-01-01 ch 12, | abuseThanks for the review, and yes, it does seem that we have somewhat similar takes towards dancing. Very nicely written. I love Benoni and Nobleman too. I like how you set out to do this 'project' of sorts revolving around names. Always wanted one of those for myself, but never found time or inspiration. |
| Loveless To Self 2005-12-15 ch 4, | abuseWow. These small pieces of work are detailed to the point of slack-jaw. I really don't know how you build your imagination to reach these kinds of heights of detail, but I hope I can be as good as you someday. These few words in the past four chapters, although not having anything to do with each other, are very inspirational. I'm glad I checked this out, and I'm glad you wrote it. |
| Starlight Maiden 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is SO wonderful...and so short, but it really conveys the meaning. Love it, love it... |
| leben 2005-11-19 ch 17, | abuseBeautiful-- I love these. So much power, it just overwhelms. Gets the point across with great language, and does not bore the reader. Wow. This is some awesome stuff. |
| Faerylights 2005-10-28 ch 2, | abuseWow i loved this complex collection of poems and stories - great and unusual work :D |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-24 ch 5, | abusea green shadow, interesting way of putting it but i suppose that its true, really love that first little opening part with the pear trying to resist being eaten, gave an interesting effect and the stars being seen in a noon sky, muchly sweet |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-24 ch 4, | abusevery detailed and somewhat saddening, i loved the way everything was described, esp the one hand between her legs, i dont know, it made her seem all the more heart broken, just beautifully written and very observant piece of prose here, wonderful |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-24 ch 3, | abusedo you actually know how to say that crazy ** word?!?! anwayz, intense little bit of prose there, it was told very romantically, i love the snow, nicely done |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-22 ch 2, | abusereally dig the kiss your dream come true, has a nice sound to it, flows nicely in the mouth, muchly prettily done |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseinteresting little opposite play going on here, muchly like it though, made me thouhtful, sweet little haiku here |