A very powerful story. It brought tears to my eyes and made my stomach clench. It reminds me of the time I was saved, although the people here were certainly in worse circumstances.

Hello, my name is Navaura, and I wasn't going to read your story, because I feel restless now, but I did read a little of it, but I just decided I'll read it because I tried reading another story, when I realized I actually liiked reading yours more. If you want to check out mine you can.It's a Christian story, but it's titled under romance. I would like some feed back. Be brutally honest if you like. Well, that's all for now. P.S. Be prepared for a review tomorrow from me about your story.Navaura ~Nubian QueenTitle: Finding Peace

Hey, great story. :-) I love reading Christian fiction.

A couple of things, comments really - I'm not sure about the idea of visions from/conversations with dead family members from a biblical perspective, though I understand their purpose in the story. Secondly, the whole "Christian dating a non-Christian" thing - I was a little uncomfortable with it with regard to what Paul says in 2 Corinthians 6. My parents certainly wouldn't let my sister do the same.

That said, I did really enjoy the story. Had me on the edge of my seat several times, especially when the shot was fired...

GREAT STORY! The ending was fantastic; it kind of signaled a cycle that keeps readers wondering but not too much. Great job!

~happy writing~

Wow. That was a nice sweet ending! I really like this! You shoul dcontinue it, like, in the far in the future or something! Itd be pretty cool, neh? I for one would love to knwo what happens next! A minor wording mistake (you put "being showing", should be "be showing", only thing! In chpater 11) Keep up your great work!

*snif* a happy ending! Great way to sum it up; I would have liked to see what happened to C.J., however. It is great that you ended it with Curtis sharing his newfound faith. Keep writing!

Oh.my.gosh. she cant be dead. she isnt dead. please say she isnt dead?wow. so climactic and then..wow. please, please continue? i need to know..is she really dead?

AH! You can't end it that way! I hope there's more coming! Maybe we'll see C.J. get saved? It's very good.

Man, this is GREAT! I've been reading it for the past thirty minutes, and I don't think I've come across a better "christian" story on FP! Keep it up; this is going on my faves!

~happy writing~

Ooh... I liked this. And that's saying a lot, considering that this is Christian and I'm a Satanist.

AHAHAH! PLEASE!! write more! It is so incredibly good, really! It carries such a strong message, please, please, continue! im so definitly sending this link to my friend. This is so amazing! Please, keep writing!

Make sure you finish this soon - you should be proud: I NEVER EVER EVER read romances, because usually they're stupid. This story is awesome, and I hope you will continue - I assume that this is not the end! I have one of my own Christian novel that I wrote, although it isn't posted on this website yet. It's great to see fiction out there written by fellow believers!