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drummerbonbon
2005-09-29 . chapter 1
This is great! Really good...
thanks for the postive review!
RandomOreo
2005-09-28 . chapter 1
Indeed, it is very simple. It's good, but the rhyming with crowds and clowns sounds a bit forced. I like the last two lines though, very nice.
~Oreo
lordelfy
2005-09-26 . chapter 1
wow...that is awesome..it truly is..i love it
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