WOWOOWW!!
that was so cool!

i loved that last part haha

That was insane! I LOVE this stuff!
I like how you wrote it so that there's something wrong with Quentin even before we know something's wrong... like no one's that angry for long.
He has layers and he's like a kid in that all he wants is a hug and he feels ages and ages better.
Max is just a bowl of hilarity.
*rereads*

Holy Shizzle they're dead! o_o; So unexpected..

really a very special story!
very sweet and unexpected. I liked it a lot

hey nice story. like it should be in an anthology or something. and the events flowed very nicely.

weird.

I've read this story five times, at least, and it just keeps getting better. ^__^

That was definitely one of the awesomest endings EVER.

wow. how deep & thought provoking. You write so incredibly well. Keep it up.

That was weird and it creeped me out a little bit when the loop thing came into play, and the ending seems to want for a bit more, but all in all it was a nice story, and kind of cute. I like Max.

Weird im confused

I *loved* this one.
It was very cleverly written.
Sweet and sad.

wow. I have to admit I avoided fictonpress for a while because for quite some time I couldn't find anything quality to my tastes on it but I do think you've acquired a new fan. Your writing style is well practiced and your story really has depth for a one shot. You really have a chance to get to know the characters and while the title gives way to a feeling of death through the whole thing its still not blatantly obvious until the end. An enjoyable read. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Wow, the ending kind of shocked me. I picked up on the small clues, but I really wasn't expecting them both to be dead. Still though, I really enjoyed it! :)

I really liked this story..
The plot twist at the end.. well, horrified me.. but that's only because that kind of thing makes me antsy..