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Amindaya
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was definitely one of the awesomest endings EVER.
Kitsune Luvr
2008-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abusewow. how deep & thought provoking. You write so incredibly well. Keep it up.
x-princessa-temnoti-x
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was weird and it creeped me out a little bit when the loop thing came into play, and the ending seems to want for a bit more, but all in all it was a nice story, and kind of cute. I like Max.
Story Critic
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseWeird im confused
shakes kinder pinguy
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseI *loved* this one.
It was very cleverly written.
Sweet and sad.
Centi the Yaoi Hime
2007-10-06
ch 1,
abusewow. I have to admit I avoided fictonpress for a while because for quite some time I couldn't find anything quality to my tastes on it but I do think you've acquired a new fan. Your writing style is well practiced and your story really has depth for a one shot. You really have a chance to get to know the characters and while the title gives way to a feeling of death through the whole thing its still not blatantly obvious until the end. An enjoyable read. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Gravityx
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseWow, the ending kind of shocked me. I picked up on the small clues, but I really wasn't expecting them both to be dead. Still though, I really enjoyed it! :)
jjwitdaheydiddydiddy
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this story..
The plot twist at the end.. well, horrified me.. but that's only because that kind of thing makes me antsy..
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2007-04-09
ch 1,
abuseaww thats cute
=)
Lady Psychic
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseThis was an interesting story. I especially liked the plot twist in the end. After reading it several times, I noticed the clues leading up to it, but when I first read it, I was shocked. Anyways, it was well written and had likable characters.
Kilian
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abuseI wouldn't have thought this kind of end. Really liked this one too.
Arcangel-Moon
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseAww...

This was so sadly sweet...

I don't know if this is a happy ending or not...

But I like it.

Favourite.

Mew

(=^_^=) p))
Lami
2006-07-09
ch 1,
abuseoh god i knew it was coming, and yet i've got this lump in my throat now even though the end was sort of happy:) the idea is brilliant and really well done (as are the rest of your fics that i've read) you really know how to bring your charahters and the worlds the live in to life...
Lexy-Kun
2006-06-30
ch 1,
abuseOkay, so, you're definitly added to my favorite author list.This little story is sad, cute, angsty, sweet, supernatural and realistic at the same time. I love it !I'm totally in love with the couple Max-Quentin. I want to read more of them ! So sad it's probably not gonna happen. But well, this end's really cool too so, I'm not gonna complain.Thank you a huge lot for this one-shot ! I love it beyond word. Hm... If I find the time and if I'm not too lazy, would you let me translate it in French ? Pretty please ? Of course I'll stipulate in bold letters that this story isn't mine but yours.Well, whatever your answer is, please give it to me via my e-mail : louveka @ hotmail . comThanks again for this one-shot, and I'm hoping for a positive answerps : sorry for all the mistakes I've probably made, but i'm still learning english so...
Sysi
2006-06-27
ch 1,
abuseThe atmosphere of this story is magnificent. All the little things that build it - and still I managed not to foresee the ending. (Even though when Max said that "It's almost behind us" line, the story reminded me of an urban legend about a guy who picked up a hitchhiker, who turned up to be a ghost.)
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