 darkenedmelody 2005-12-19 . chapter 1I came across your poetry by chance- I'm glad I did. This stanza:
I'll hold you in my arms tonight,And bleed, my darling, bleed;We knew from the start it wasn't right;The pain that we both need
is my favorite. Something about it sends chills down my spine. |
 tgabriel 2005-09-26 . chapter 1I usually don't review two poems in a row like this, because it makes me feel like a stalker or something, but this one was clearly just too awesome not to comment on. You have a definite way with words. And images. And emotions. "I want to watch your body drop" and "bleed, my darling, bleed" both struck me... great work. |