Interesting topic. Very well written, just this teasing little minx of a thing, and quite mature in nature.

I like your little A/N.

lol about the author's note at the bottom. Again, this piece painted so many images in my head, and struck me with a very raw and honest insight. I love sincerity. I love serious thoughtfulness. (Can't stand Ms. Hilton. ;) No, I take that back. I can't stand the shallowness--the twisted idea of worth. I hope someday, she finds out people can like her for more than her sexuality and her body and her smile.)

I'm indescribably happy that you used the wor sagacity. One of my favorites ever! In any case, this was interesting, and actually pretty relevant right now, as I'm having a lot of problems with my school admin and teachers at the moment. Not discipline problems- they're just hopelessly ineficient when it comes to... well.. most anything. So this is an eye-opener. I should get off my high horse.Good Work.

Also, thanks very being honest in the reviews. It's hard to get people to review honestly because everyone here is desperate to get them in return. It's always refreshing to get real openly critical thinkers as reviewers. I admit my past few poems have been angsty and cliche- uncharactaristically so, I'd say. My last account was a bit more unique. Lately I've been pretty angsty myself (and having migraines- which are never good if you want to write anything remotely good.) so maybe that's this cause of it. I shouldn't be making excuses- I should be thankful i was able to make my angst even semi-enjoyable to you. Anyways, thanks.

-simpleton