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| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 10,  | abuseWeird place to stop, woman. >_ |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 9, | abuseMagi is my favorite character now. I will never refer to him as Magenta, though. It bothers me that you had already used such a ridiculous name. n_n I can't wait until I smoke outside of McDonalds. |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 8, | abuseI dig. Dreams make me happy =] |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 7, | abuseAnd now I'm atached. You really shouldn't leave this story to die. The scene with the fat guy was really cool... and... I dunno... I just totally dig this. The ending was good too, considering the fact you had just shown Vincents good side... he fell back into being a d1ckf4ce. XD *buzz buzz* |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 6, | abuse=D I really like this chapter. Their relationship is demented. |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 5, | abuseI love Vincent o_o He's an a s s s s s s s hole. |
| FTL 2008-02-21 ch 4, | abuseHmm I don't like the beginning of the chapter too much just because it seems like forced introductions to me, besides that I dig the characters. The second half of the chapter is really good. Your dialogue is believable and interesting and I heart Twigguz forever. n_n Your writing flows in way I envy hardcore. |
| FTL 2008-02-13 ch 3, | abuseHa. Rape. |
| FTL 2008-02-13 ch 2, | abuseGod, you were like... f*ck1ng 12 when you wrote this and it's still amazing. I...Hate...You. XD Ahh... No I don't. I envy you. Gross. I will read more of this later. The forced narcissism is great, in that pitiful kind of way. Oh, and I think everyone falls victim to being self-concious and conceited in front of mirrors, every now and then. Sometimes I obsess over one thing going on in my appearance, trying to fix it until I realize NOBODY would ever notice it. Ever. It's so foolish it makes me sick. n_n Love. |
| paputsza 2006-12-03 ch 7, | abusehmm, there's a thing called a plot. It's what happens when boy meets boy, and boy gets boy, then they make graphic love. Come on now, you can do it. Just find a seme, a good one who I don't want to combust my computer over. |
| paputsza 2006-12-03 ch 6, | abuseHe deserves to get caught! I'm a little angry. Even if Vincent's hot he should just mess with the weak mind of the narrarator like that. |
| paputsza 2006-12-03 ch 5, | abuseWhat's up with your fantasy for having some gothic and lolita chick rub behind your ears? perv |
| paputsza 2006-12-03 ch 4, | abuseIt's a shame how I know all these abreviations like DDR, DnD, and even WOW. I've played none of them, but I go to a magnet school that gives students laptops, so knowing what it is is an absolute must. |
| paputsza 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseHe's like a puppy, or what you'd expect a puppy to be like if it were a human... Anyways, love the story. ha. Love, and I mean that wholy, it is and you are my only!! it's called sucking up to the updater. XOXOXO have my children... at this point the story may turn out horrible, but I don't care! I'm sorta desperate here for nice stories that are occassionaly updated. |
| A. C. Oasis 2006-10-06 ch 10, | abuseI am in love with this story...Update soon! :D |