“Scott Danvers,” he whimpered.~~OMG, it's a clyclops-ms. marvel clone mix! Ahem. Sorry, for the fangirl outburst. lol.

I love the connections that come to light in this... the revelations! :D The Warden explanation. Boy, Rems isn't going to be happy to hear that her new guy (Travis Lee Warden) is clean after all. :O

Well, not squeeky, necessarily... Dang it, i want the next installment now!

And the Geisha alluding... Claire? You've been naughty.

I love the characters in this. I especially love how we really get more the 'every day' version of the crime fighter in this. It's a very unique and approachable perspective. Because even when he's in the costume, I almost forget he is. That's a fabulous effect. He's just a man afterall, you know? Well, of course you know. You wrote it. ~_~o

And Kuzuki... :shivers: She is bad a$$!

And the ending... goodness. I'm thankful for the acknowledgement to my suggestion, but you made it what it is. You really did punch that emotion through there. Fabulously done. FABULICIOUS!

Congrats!