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| luv me like no other 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abusei like the theme of this poem lots. it makes the audience think. |
| choking on your words again 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusei love this ot was great :) [-favorites] |
| Lavi R 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! this is great!! i love it... its bittersweet great job!! |
| emma 2007-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusehah, i dont normally read poems but this one is awesome and so cute..but sort of like depressing at the same time ...just awesome |
| wecouldgoandget40s 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is excellent. I really liked it. Great job. My grade: A+ |
| Deprecor 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was very thought provoking. The flow was nice and the ending interesting. |
| Nolkiya 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good, especially the ending. |
| bangbangstartagain 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abusehey. this was awesome. i really like it. the flow was perfect and for some strange reason it made me think of that weird song "theres a whole in my bucket, dear liza, dear liza, theres a hole in my bucket, dear liza, a hole." haha. yes. im weird. sue me. but im adding this to my favourites list anyway. good work :P D |
| StoryJunkie 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseThought-provoking. Where does it end? I love how you left the last question unanswered. |
| Nianko 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI love it.It's a great piece of work?Really.Really good job.It simply flows and it's really great.Good work. |
| cpaa 2005-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really best thing i've heard all day. |
| JaNde 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT! ^^ very well done! it's on my faves |
| DrownASiren 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. The dialogue is perfect, and it even has a bit of a melody. I love it. |