she/he didnt answer the last bit

Nice poem although I do have to say that the darling's love isn't that big because he wouldn't go after if she went overseas and everything. Did i get the genders right?

that was really...
i can't put into words.
but i like it very much

I loved it! The ending was especially good. You're an amazing writer!

Oh, this is very interesting. Very, very interesting. I like it a lot. Nicely written. :)

That was really gorgeous! It was very melodious...beautiful piece! :)

i like the theme of this poem lots. it makes the audience think.

i love this
ot was great :)
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WOW!!
this is great!!
i love it...
its bittersweet
great job!!

hah, i dont normally read poems but this one is awesome and so cute..but sort of like depressing at the same time ...just awesome

This is excellent. I really liked it. Great job. My grade: A+

That was very thought provoking. The flow was nice and the ending interesting.

That was really good, especially the ending.

hey. this was awesome. i really like it. the flow was perfect and for some strange reason it made me think of that weird song "theres a whole in my bucket, dear liza, dear liza, theres a hole in my bucket, dear liza, a hole."

haha. yes. im weird. sue me. but im adding this to my favourites list anyway. good work :P

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Thought-provoking. Where does it end? I love how you left the last question unanswered.