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A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-10-26 . chapter 1
she/he didnt answer the last bit
bubublacz 2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Nice poem although I do have to say that the darling's love isn't that big because he wouldn't go after if she went overseas and everything. Did i get the genders right?
grassong 2009-08-25 . chapter 1
that was really...
i can't put into words.
but i like it very much
Chromes 2009-07-16 . chapter 1
I loved it! The ending was especially good. You're an amazing writer!
fictionalxbliss 2009-02-09 . chapter 1
Oh, this is very interesting. Very, very interesting. I like it a lot. Nicely written. :)
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-11-11 . chapter 1
That was really gorgeous! It was very melodious...beautiful piece! :)
luv me like no other 2008-02-04 . chapter 1
i like the theme of this poem lots. it makes the audience think.
choking on your words again 2007-09-09 . chapter 1
i love this
ot was great :)
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Lavi R 2007-06-09 . chapter 1
WOW!!
this is great!!
i love it...
its bittersweet
great job!!
emma 2007-04-13 . chapter 1
hah, i dont normally read poems but this one is awesome and so cute..but sort of like depressing at the same time ...just awesome
wecouldgoandget40s 2007-02-11 . chapter 1
This is excellent. I really liked it. Great job. My grade: A+
Deprecor 2007-01-14 . chapter 1
That was very thought provoking. The flow was nice and the ending interesting.
Nolkiya 2007-01-06 . chapter 1
That was really good, especially the ending.
bangbangstartagain 2006-09-11 . chapter 1
hey. this was awesome. i really like it. the flow was perfect and for some strange reason it made me think of that weird song "theres a whole in my bucket, dear liza, dear liza, theres a hole in my bucket, dear liza, a hole."

haha. yes. im weird. sue me. but im adding this to my favourites list anyway. good work :P

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StoryJunkie 2005-12-30 . chapter 1
Thought-provoking. Where does it end? I love how you left the last question unanswered.
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