I think this is my most favorite poem of yours, I love your details and how it ends! I especially love the line, "Vodka mixed with bubblegum" awesome!

M, wonderful.

this was very vivid. beautiful imagery in a different sort of way because it doesnt seem like it should be beautiful...if that makes sense, a very visual poem. 'i awake:guilty. ' great line. keep it up- the Lady Elaine