Obviously people don't know that a song has no form. A song is a song based on the fact that it can fit to music, which I hear for this. Really great piece . . . just flows really nicely with vivid imagery . . . .great job.

this is more like a poem than a song. most songs have choruses and this doesn't. I like it as a poem but I wouldn't classify it as a song.

Great poem! I'm not sure if you intended it or not but I love the way you used the imagery of the prostitute, much like the Babylon The Great harlot depicted in Revelation! Even if you didn't, there's great stuff here with excellent poetic language and feeling! Thoroughly enjoyed!