| Reviews for hesheitour volcanic |
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punctured.lungs 7/31/11 . chapter 1incredible. |
notACTUALLYwriting 11/26/05 . chapter 1weird and detached in an artistic way. nice. |
Nobody-n-Particular 10/21/05 . chapter 1Abstract and rich. |
hey maria 10/9/05 . chapter 1...Wow. Love the use of parentheses to add more to a word. I don't actually get the meaning...but it's beautiful nonetheless. The last line is so final and powerful. |
not sure yet 10/5/05 . chapter 1tasting like aluminum i dont know, it's good, but i feel blank after reading it, really love the first stanza and the and symbols, nicely done |
simpleplan13 10/3/05 . chapter 1cool.. I like it a lot |
mizu no kokoro 10/2/05 . chapter 1wow loved the formatting the meaning was profound, i must say i'm impressed keep writing! |
by His blood 10/2/05 . chapter 1(this is eyes of lithium.) this. was. fucking. brilliant. i almost cried, this affected me so deeply. it makes me want to scream & cry & laugh all at once. excellent job, as always. i loved this. |
Haberdasher 10/2/05 . chapter 1good stuff, very jagged and emotional. m, i love the abstract...- the Lady Elaine |
crackpot 10/1/05 . chapter 1I think it'd work even sans formatting. |
this is murder 10/1/05 . chapter 1that's so cool, the format, and the poem itself is really beautiful. i love it. |
zakei 9/29/05 . chapter 1WOAH. thats INTERESTING. i dont get the splitting and the bracketing and the dotting, but it looks like a very cool picture. hahas. i dont particularly get the meaning of the poem. : |
Elizabeth Ebony 9/28/05 . chapter 1W.O.W your formatting only makes it all the more totally&utterly gem from you-your works never disapoint . |
lackluster 9/28/05 . chapter 1something about this is electrifying. 'hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword'.wow, breathtaking line. you add so much depth to this, it's eternal,almost. |
GypsyMothra 9/28/05 . chapter 1"hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword" I can hear that being sung. Beautiful job. And I love the stuttering in "(j-j-just like ink&betrayal)" Another wonderful poem. |