|Reviews for hesheitour volcanic|
| punctured.lungs 7/31/11 . chapter 1
| notACTUALLYwriting 11/26/05 . chapter 1
weird and detached in an artistic way. nice.
| Nobody-n-Particular 10/21/05 . chapter 1
Abstract and rich.
| hey maria 10/9/05 . chapter 1
Love the use of parentheses to add more to a word. I don't actually get the meaning...but it's beautiful nonetheless. The last line is so final and powerful.
| not sure yet 10/5/05 . chapter 1
tasting like aluminum
i dont know, it's good, but i feel blank after reading it, really love the first stanza and the and symbols, nicely done
| simpleplan13 10/3/05 . chapter 1
cool.. I like it a lot
| mizu no kokoro 10/2/05 . chapter 1
wow loved the formatting the meaning was profound, i must say i'm impressed
| by His blood 10/2/05 . chapter 1
(this is eyes of lithium.) this. was. fucking. brilliant. i almost cried, this affected me so deeply. it makes me want to scream & cry & laugh all at once. excellent job, as always. i loved this.
| Haberdasher 10/2/05 . chapter 1
good stuff, very jagged and emotional. m, i love the abstract...- the Lady Elaine
| crackpot 10/1/05 . chapter 1
I think it'd work even sans formatting.
| this is murder 10/1/05 . chapter 1
that's so cool, the format, and the poem itself is really beautiful. i love it.
| zakei 9/29/05 . chapter 1
WOAH. thats INTERESTING. i dont get the splitting and the bracketing and the dotting, but it looks like a very cool picture. hahas. i dont particularly get the meaning of the poem. :
| Elizabeth Ebony 9/28/05 . chapter 1
your formatting only makes it all the more totally&utterly gem from you-your works never disapoint .
| lackluster 9/28/05 . chapter 1
something about this is electrifying.
'hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword'.wow, breathtaking line.
you add so much depth to this, it's eternal,almost.
| GypsyMothra 9/28/05 . chapter 1
"hush(littlebaby)don'tsayaword" I can hear that being sung. Beautiful job. And I love the stuttering in "(j-j-just like ink&betrayal)" Another wonderful poem.