Wow, I can almost relate. It's quite teenage-the two loves of one person seen from introspect. But then again even adults have similar feelings. I like the wording-twisted heart is pretty graphic and seems to utter the torment the speaker nice, gets the point across.

Thx for the review on No Sugar Added!This is a beautiful poem...no too confusing but not cliche eitherI can relate so that's always good :)Keep writingThx again!Peron