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| Rubyof theBlackBlood 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like an awesome story. I look forward to reading more |
| Sangs Bleus 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI really like it! (: Now can you please read mine. Malice is the Word. |
| Chocolate Ninj4 2006-09-03 ch 6, | abuseA very interesting chapter! It will be interesting to read Chess' backstory. It might show some sort of connection or similarities between how the different characters got to Wonderland. I would imagine that it isn't completely random. |
| noah 2006-08-30 ch 6, anon. | abusehi! i am so sorry it took me so flipping long to review this. there is no excuse, i am a terrible person. anyway, i loved it. and i feel closer to hatter now. but all of you stories... are having separation anxiety, maxwell-sama. i'll tell you what, i'll give you lots of cookies and myspace comments if you update, ok? |
| Syringe Synesthesia 2006-05-22 ch 6, | abuseGosh golly jeepers! I seriously, seriously LOVE this story. Alice in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass were always my favorite stories growing up (I even have the poem Jabberwocky memorized by heart), but this gives it a lovely, dark new spin. I would give you a lovely critique, but, eh, I suck at it, so I'll just say that this story rocks. |
| chibi suppi 2006-05-09 ch 6, | abuseI... love it. This is my fav chapter omg... xx you have no freakin' clue how much I love this! (it even beats out Unexplainable) But damn you is all I have to say for the poor irish boy. xx I fluffed him, and you killed him! Then crushed my dreams! You crushed them so hard! But omg.. it reminded me of Jack and Faust... I swear both bro' have their little red heads. And if I can get the resources I will turn this into a photostory. xx ~suppi |
| Kimmi Gray 2006-05-04 ch 6, | abuseAWESOME!! You updated :is happy hatter now:: Heh great job! I believe this is the longest yet! Awesome! Heh can't wait for more, keep up the great job! |
| chibi suppi 2006-04-08 ch 5, | abusexx I want more... you aren't home so I couldn't call you.. meh.. so I want more stories. OO ~suppi |
| DreamerAg 2006-04-05 ch 5, | abuseI really love this story. You do an excelent job with the characters. I can just about picture them clearly Now Im not a total fan of Alice in Wonderland, but reading this makes me wanna watch it. |
| Chocolate Ninj4 2006-03-28 ch 5, | abuseKemushi + Squeaks = Hot Couple This story is so interesting. I like that we don't know anything more than Alice does. And all the characters are so mysterious. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| afk 2006-03-28 ch 5, | abusei'm liking this first chapter very much! like always your dark style is really cool! XD |
| Kimmi Gray 2006-03-28 ch 5, | abuseYay! This was great! I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the awesome work! |
| carved-in-shadows 2006-02-22 ch 4, | abusethat was quite fascinating to read :) Hope you update really soon! |
| Sesshamare 2005-12-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh my Hyne!! finally, a gothy take on that story! Well, apart from American McGee's Alice (love that Alice). I was waiting for one... if I could write, I would have written one already, though not as good. -_-' Keep it coming! |
| Scooz 2005-12-08 ch 4, | abuseAh, interesting. But the question that keep tugging at my mind is, is she the original Alice in this story, cuz the way she started out with the White Rabbit, he made it sound like a game and Alice was her chosen character. Or possibly, she is the original Alice and had gone in her childhood, grew up and forgot, and now she is back and everyone remembers but her...Basically the story is really interesting so far and I am really curious to see how it develops. I would post the next chapter to my story, but my computer crashed at home and I have to use my school's for the most part. Anyway, I'm enjoying how you have shaped your story so far and I hope you update soon. |