Hey Paigey,I LOVE this poem! Guess what! I updated my website, .com, and I need more stuff for my paige's advice column. Guess what else! I put a crap load of new poems on fictionpress, so check it out! It's fruitin ya and laterness,Blonde psycic

interesting, spatula, very interesting... i like it. emo poetry rocks. i forgot to tell u what i was going to tell u on the first review. so i had to review another, even though i was going to anyways :-) so anyhow, i got like 3 warnings on my computer from getting on fictionpress. my computer is bein monitered, haha. so if fictionpress is blocked, yeah... that might explain it. haha, anyhow, emo poetry is the koolest thing ever, and so is spelling kool with a k. haha, plus its easier to spatula, *u weren't a cannable today!*RKT

oh god i ask myself that all the time.

i think i'm as confused as you are

I think this needs a bit of work, but it shows promise, so don't be discouraged.

Keep at it.

-simpleton

Heartfelt and honest; I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.