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Reviews For: We used to do alot of things

sweethalflife
2005-12-15
ch 1,
abuse"How i pine not to be a maple tree"

BRILLIANT line

i really like this poem
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWhere is loyalty?
simpleplan13
2005-10-03
ch 1,
abuseso sad and beautiful... tahnks for your review (ps in regards to my poem us... trust me i havent lost my morals ive jsut opened my eyes to a differnt world if that makes sense)
catseyeview
2005-10-01
ch 1,
abuseI loved the line..."How I pine to be a maple tree - we did a lot of things" - deep with regret or darkness...nicely done. Sorry for my lack of reviews lately - a long story short (horribly busy with work and school) I would love to suggest some poets though - Raphael Campo, Lorna Goodison (I got to interview her) - she's great!
AllyCred
2005-09-29
ch 1,
abusei like it, nice imagery.

lots of love~AC~
Faithless Juliet
2005-09-28
ch 1,
abuseIts interesting; the light tone was what I noticed first, its different from your other works. I like the simple memoy of it, you loved once what now you can't touch, and you need now what you lost then. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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