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| sweethalflife 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuse"How i pine not to be a maple tree" BRILLIANT line i really like this poem |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWhere is loyalty? |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseso sad and beautiful... tahnks for your review (ps in regards to my poem us... trust me i havent lost my morals ive jsut opened my eyes to a differnt world if that makes sense) |
| catseyeview 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved the line..."How I pine to be a maple tree - we did a lot of things" - deep with regret or darkness...nicely done. Sorry for my lack of reviews lately - a long story short (horribly busy with work and school) I would love to suggest some poets though - Raphael Campo, Lorna Goodison (I got to interview her) - she's great! |
| AllyCred 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abusei like it, nice imagery. lots of love~AC~ |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseIts interesting; the light tone was what I noticed first, its different from your other works. I like the simple memoy of it, you loved once what now you can't touch, and you need now what you lost then. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |