wow. that's really awesome. really strong emotions in this song. great job.

I can just imagine someone singing this... again, it's beautiful.

This is really good, very deep and touching. I can really relate to this situation at the moment. Good work. QueenVixta

I think your addition of what kind of musical instruments play where is either going to spark the imagination in someone who really likes the song, but moreso just a waste of reading, because no one can guess how the song in your head goes. Call it a song, but let us read it as verse, not sheet music.