Reviews for This Precious Moment

aingeal uisce 2005-12-04 ch 1,	abuseThat's really beautiful...
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-09-27 ch 1,	abuseWoah...very nicely written. I enjoyed the passion and love writen in this poem. Its so morally profound that I can't think of anything bad about it, though i'm no really supporting the war goin on in Iraq. Sweet piece! Thnx for sharing.
grip 2005-09-27 ch 1,	abusewell done. metaphors are well-placed, and the end 'in that moment, at that moment' is definitely the climax/turning point of the poem.
SecretsBehindTheCloset 2005-09-27 ch 1,	abuseI love it... seriously i do. I have respect for anyone in the military and should be joining it in the near future. I applaud you, it truely brought a tear to my eye
The Gobbler 2005-09-27 ch 1,	abusecries SO sad! But well written, I really liked the line "Yet when the sadness that floods your eyes bleeds through..." It was awesome. Keep writing!