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| Jezsh 2005-12-24 ch 1,  | abusegorgeous, it's like reading consciousness. Just reminds you how beautiful words can be. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseSimply gorgeous. |
| in theory 2005-09-29 ch 1, | abuseIt works really well as a fluid sentence somehow, it drags you through so many different emotions in one continuous stream of words. Impressive. |
| account not in use 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuse**. beautiful wording & imagery. |
| Elizabeth Ebony 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abusewow.i adore it,formatting is perfectly delicious.drips off the screen like honey. E.Ebony |
| smile persephone 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseI loveadoreenvy(youfor)this. "mo(u)rnings" is magical and I love "at the flitter of even the flightiest of bird(ish) wings". I love "t-e-c-h-n-i-c-o-l-o-u-r" as well. (I love everything.) |
| lackluster 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abusegorgeous. |
| GypsyMothra 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery was absa-tively fantastic. Love the "foot-prints we left behind" Reminds me of a lot of things. Just the way it flows is fantasic. I love it. |
| katmufla 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abusei absolutely love this. amazing stuff. i love your use of parenthesis and the way you put the words into action. i felt this piece. i actually felt it. my only issue is with "it" in the fourth line before "(wild wild...)". your use of "it" sounds like you're talking about Winter when I'm sure you're talking about the rain that collects in the footprints. great though, i really love this! |