Reviews for Crimson Moon Series: Broken Toy

Reviews For: Crimson Moon Series: Broken Toy - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Jeweline 2008-06-30 ch 1,	abuseAnother absolute favorite
hearthappy52 2008-04-19 ch 20, anon.	abuseThat was a gosh awesome amazing story, thank you.
nicolajane 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseloved this story! I can't think of one critical thing to say. I really enjoyed the way you ended it, summing up what happened to Isaac especially. I can't wait to read what happens to Coyle and Sammara, but would love to see Adrial get what is coming to him, maybe even love!
Lisa Schwalbach 2007-08-31 ch 20, anon.	abuseI really liked this story it was very interesting from the start. I like reading a story when it is obvious to me anyway that the author must have thought the whole plot out before even typing one word. The romance that transpired between them built up at a very nice pace. I like a story that let's me work up to the answer and does not make it obvious. There are a lot of stories out there that are so weak I already know what happen because they do not know how to confuse the reader. One thing I did feel was you might have rushed the ending like you were trying to throw it all in before you forgot anything not that I minded, every writer has there own unique flare. Even thought the ending went by very fast it still would have had the same conclusion even if you stretched it out a little more. Some readers might finish the book a little confused and might actually have to read the last couple of pages over to get it straight. I really liked it though speaking for myself I like the endings where they slam you in the brain with all the information you had been collecting through the entire book and you sit back while fireworks go off in your head and you go oh, oh, oh I get it now! There is a book by stephen king called now im not sure, I think it is called bag of bones or the bone collector? Anyway the word bone is in it. That book is a prime example of what I was talking about by the fast slam your brain with the facts ending. I hope to read more from you in the future.
AJ 2007-08-27 ch 20, anon.	abuseI wasn't sure I wanted to read this story, but I was really bored and started skimming through the first couple of chapters. By the time I had gotten to the third chapter my mind really started processing what I was reading and I went back and re-read everything. I really enjoyed the story.
Tempest116 2007-07-22 ch 20,	abuseOkay this is the third novel of yours that I've read so far. I have to say that you're an outstanding author and I truly enjoy reading your books. I really hope you'll get these published someday.
dawn's unforgiving darkness 2007-07-20 ch 7,	abusei thought corliss would be with coyle and trent would like samamara
cyra 2007-02-01 ch 20, anon.	abusethanks for sharing that story it was awesome i like vampire & werewolf stories the only thing that's sad it's i didn't see more about the werewolves
sunflowersing 2007-01-02 ch 20,	abuseI cried when Corliss was sentenced. I was soo upset, then when Corliss turned out to be alive, I cried again, with happiness. I think I'm too emotional for my own good. sunflowersing
sunflowersing 2007-01-01 ch 3, anon.	abusesigh Men and their football... I prefer baseball though. Great story btw! It is the typical male bonding through sports that makes me laugh! hehe sunflowersing
joker42 2006-11-27 ch 20,	abuseThis is a story that I can read over and over and still be entertained. Great Job!
koyama meryl 2006-10-05 ch 20,	abusehi, i'm back ^^. like you see i begin to read every longer story of you now. mhm... i wonder how long i need for the next one. i think i have enough material with a lot of pages to read. i'm happy about this. okay, maybe i shouldn't. yesterday i read till 2 or 3 pm and i go earlier (i go to a thing like a college or university) so i can finish the story today lol. okay, so i doesn't have something to say about false grammar (i couldn't see it if it spring in my arms ans with the writting skills it is more bad) and like you now i like your writtings. they are... how could i discribe them... i would say they are mature. not (like often) so that two people see each other and in no time they are together/sleep with each other and and are in love, than bad boys/girls (they 'love' one of the lovebirds or hate them because a dark dark past) try to brack there love but in the and the two are more in love than before. sometimes it's nice but hey, i'm not 14 (this is long gone and ich like it) and so i need more mature storys like you. and so i'm proud of myself to find you ;-P. okay, now i end this nonsense maybe till latermeryl_koyama^^
Eboni 2006-02-12 ch 20, anon.	abuseAlso, wanted to add thanks for the epliogue. It really helped end the story the right way without leaving too many questions unanswered. I personally love epliogues b/c they just help give the story a since of completeness.
Eboni 2006-02-08 ch 20, anon.	abuseLove the ending. I didn't know what to expect at the end, but it endly very well. I would love to read more stories by you where there is more focus on the romance like this one was.
Eboni 2006-01-27 ch 18, anon.	abuseI am a die-hard romantic so I hope this ends happily. I have to say, this is the story that hardly people know about, but everyone should be reading. You have great talent and I am glad to be one of the people who discovered your work. It's fantasy,but intelligence, intense, serious, and romantic all at the same time. Update soon.

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