Reviews for Behold the Beholder

EMILY! 2006-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abuserose. come to europe with me in one year. next summer.
freethephoenix 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abusehehee Other Reviewers. I understood the last stanza! Anyway, I like the triple line scheme you have going. I don't read a lot of poetry but this doesn't seem common. And the words you used are so full, even though you only used three lines in every stanza they say so much. And I had to say, just like your self-esteem... I'm a phoenix! haha!
Indigo-Andie 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abuseokay honestly at first i was getting this, or so i thought...i lost it with the whole rosemary thing, all i can think of is rosemary's baby- and i'm not sure if that has anything to do with your poem. but i like it- specially the water draped in stone, i had to think about that...
Mr. Singh is back 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abuseI totally lost what the poem was about on the last stanza. It sounds really good, though. And I see where you're coming from, but because I couldn't quite comprehend the last stanza, I'm afraid I may have missed the point. But still, excellent diction. Good poem.