Did you know the first line of the poem is cast off to the side. Or else it didn't load right on my page. Either way, gorgeous images! Great idea to use the idea of a muse. It's a desperate wonderful poem, but it looks like when you wrote this, your muse was there all along! :)

Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks for the review on "All You Once Knew Is Lost" chapters 1 through 3. Glad you like it. I appreciated your compliment and review!

So full of emotion and images...great work, keep writing!

Oh, this is...I'm speechless, truly. I can't find the right words that will do this poem justice.

It's amazing. I ached when I read this - the pictures you paint with your words are just...amazing :)

I adore this. Definitely goes to my fav. list.

-Luma

wow, that was great!oh oh oh!next chapter for m 2 is up!

check it out!

and keep up the good work!

this poem would be all the more powerful if you described the importance of the girl before (or after) you lose her. this poem is good, nonetheless

WOW! I like it! My first Journalism writing buddy!

I like it. Keep writing... I've got this nagging urge to warn you about your spelling but as far as I can tell it's flawless...

might've been the 'leve' in the summary...