wow. i felt it.

figuratively speaking, you'd be together, even while you slept.I think you mean New Year's instead of New Year.The poem would be much better received if you put punctuation in it. You put commas to seperate thoughts inside each line, but not from line to line. And also, in relation to this, you should read your poem out loud, that way you will find the best way to split up your poem into lines for the easiest way to read. good luck!