hmm...you are really good with short pieces. 'swimming in black/with grey' i like that _

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oh i just remembered you asked if i'm Christian - I am.

o I like the levels of complexity this connotes... Except I don't understand it. ;;

I love it. a tad bit complicated. But once you wade through the true meaning it means something incrediably powerful.

Good Work!

Could it be mood swings the gray and black reflections that reflect in your mirror?

Great Poem

Helen

"swimming black, with grey" i like that line for some reason.. it's haunting (to me at least) and the poem in general has a haunted feel to it.. nice

lovely work - short and simple but great! :D

Hey there. Thanks for the constructive criticism on Among the Hidden. I kind of just wrote it in a fit of...emoness, if that's a word...

Anyways, onto your poem. I like this. The repitition is...slightly out of place, I think, but since it's a poem about a mirror, it works out very well in the end. Very pretty; I liked it a lot...

PS. When I posted Among the Hidden, it was...uh..5:07 or something like that in the morning and I was amazed that anyone would be awake that early other than me...ha, ha, in England, I'm sure it's much later.

Hey, thanks for checking me out.A nature love I see.

Have you ever tried looking into a mirror with another mirror behind you? It mystifies me, all those reflections and the confined space expanded. I believe this is a poem about what behind the I-eyes, what the thoughts on what is seen like smoke and mirrors is about. "Even i don't understand"

I find pale blue and grey mirrors cool anyway. A nice riddle.

Leyman

hm, I'll try to guess, is the smoke a metaphoric image of your mind? hehe, I like rhyming poems, try some of those, but its hard to convey some images with the restrains of rhyming thats why "free" verse was born, aw

Nice and short. I like it, though I am more of the long type. Still, it's good. By the way, I've written a little more of everything. Yuo should take a look, and please add me to your alerts if you haven't already. Anyways, keep up the good work and please write some more stuff. Tschau,Sam

Its a cute picture. Simple and written nicely, thnx for sharing.

bravo bravo enchore enchore *applouds* well said, great picture!