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| boys kiss girls 2007-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis made me smile. I loved the flow and I'm going to venture out and make a pun... it flowed like water (ha ha). I'm a Pisces and I absolutely adored the second stanza. It was beautiful. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseHm pisces... such an interesting place to be in the world... or born under. Yet your imaginitive side shows you are perhaps one... as well as intuitive in your writing. Its interesting. I found your poem beautiful and dark... I love the adventure you spill out... the movements of the gods and the will to keep going. Very good piece. The flow was wonderful as well as the imagery. Write on! |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseI liek this.. very cool the whole water thing |
| WormsofCharacter 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis quite good. "Ocean of electric danger" is a wonderful line, I think. By the way, I like what you did with "I kissed a girl who wasn't you"; it has quite the regretful and even painful tone to it. I love vivid poetry. (too bad I can't write it myself!) |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abusegood ending...i like it its good |