you have potential, i can see it, kid! keep running! just cool your heals in the creek every once in a while. the wolves get tired

One thing you might want to do before posting your poems is run it through spell check. Um. Your should be you're. Finnally should be finally. Relize should be realize. Its should be it's. But, rather poignant. Interesting run-on ish sort of thing. Keep writing, expand your horizons, etc. etc.

i really liked your poems, can you review all mine