|Reviews for Awake|
| run rabbit run 1/7/06 . chapter 1
you have potential, i can see it, kid! keep running! just cool your heals in the creek every once in a while. the wolves get tired
| ronshaberry 10/21/05 . chapter 1
One thing you might want to do before posting your poems is run it through spell check. Um. Your should be you're. Finnally should be finally. Relize should be realize. Its should be it's. But, rather poignant. Interesting run-on ish sort of thing. Keep writing, expand your horizons, etc. etc.
| The Lord's Disciple 10/3/05 . chapter 1
i really liked your poems, can you review all mine