this poem = LOVE

wicked and brilliant

Wow... Sometihng about this makes it very,wonderful. the repetition of the theme "run and hide" constantly reinforces the idea, until the end when you break off and stop hiding. And the rhyming scheme... just wow. i dunno how you do it; when i read it, it doesn't rhyme, but when i "really" read it, i dunno, the rhyme just comes out bang-swish-pow. Definitely one of my favourites. I like this.

Mwehehe, ebil and debiant mwehee.

Nice job, I like the flow of the poem. Always a nice choice/trend to abide by. Excellent.

Now write more dammit! :P

- ShadowEver

Beautiful, again. Completely different from the pulsating rythem of The Dance, but still enchanting. The last part "broken hands and some bloody thorns" reminded me of the fairy tales like Rapunzel and Sleeping Beauty where the prince had to climb through thorn and be cast upon them for his love's sake. Nice!