Reviews for roses and rainbows

Reviews For: roses and rainbows

Bleeding Regret 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abusei love the ending to this poem. its simply (or not) marvelous. very good details and imagery in this poem. my favorite lines are "my feet are muddy and i slip over the words falling out of your mouth". i dont know why i just love those lines. beautifully done.
insomnia in dreamland 2006-04-15 ch 1,	abusesplendidly beautiful. ilovelovelovelove the part about the eyes being sewed shut. its so drasticly painful & bitter but it throws such powerful emotions out there. there is so much passion in your writing, i can just feel it whenever i read any of it. its much too beautiful.
My New Pen Name 2006-03-20 ch 1,	abuseVery original use of language. Very cool, great job!Btw, your pen name is awesome.
classic violet 2006-03-19 ch 1,	abuse"my eyes aren’t suitable for eatingso I’ll sew them shut in hopes that your red, redwords will ** burn,burn in that wicked heart, andyour wicked heart willburn just like you." I love that last bit. The whole eyes are suitable for eating kind of grossed me out. But in a good way. My, this poem is so vivid, I find. Very well done!
Branwen 999 2005-12-22 ch 1, anon.	abusei love that i see everything when i read your poetry. the metaphors are almost more than i can bear. other peoples poetry has a hard time of finding my heart. yours does so and then slaps it around once it has hold.wonderful piece. thank you- kj
Elizabeth Ebony 2005-11-13 ch 1,	abuseThis is amazing.Nothing less.I love the idea of "roses and rainbows".LOVELY. E.Ebony
It Sounds Horrible 2005-11-05 ch 1,	abuseoh but i like your ending except for the repeat of the phrase wicked heart. oh i like the fall out boy refrence in the beginning. artifical light, original. nicely done.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-11-04 ch 1,	abuseHaunting detail.
Aquafied 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abusewhere I can blast thetherapist on my speakerschanting this and that- fall out boy. biznatch. and we are upset. or are we just pretending.
lackluster 2005-09-29 ch 1,	abusei likethe ending, the whole thing actually. so many great lines.
poetic abortion 2005-09-28 ch 1,	abuseendings are awful ... sometimes good (ha ha ha). anyway, I progress ... marvelous work, as always; your writing is perfection & always so deep. it penatrates the heart & leaves one sickingly achey. l o v e it. makes me simle oddly enough ... I'm must have fallen on my head while I slept ... again. ~* noelle
hiding behind amber eyes 2005-09-28 ch 1,	abuseI like the ending...a lot more than i usually like endings. lol good job like the title.

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